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Thursday, October 18, 2007

we went to the gully


we went too the gully we fuod mud and leefs a bee in the pot it is fun . bug hant we kach a bug it is a big bag it wos relee rllee frst guly we haf los of luck room 24 went too the gully.


(We went to the gully. We found mud and leaves. We put a bee in the pot. It is fun bug hunting. We caught a bug, it is a big bug. It was really, really fast.. We had lots of luck. Room 24 went to the gully.

1 comment:

Room 22 said...

That is a great recount of your bug hunt in the gully!

Miss Steptoe :)