Welcome to Room 20's Blog Page! The children have been using Word to do their paired writing once a week. This term they will be blogging their draft writing so that students, teachers, parents, grandparents and more can enjoy reading it. In most cases it will remain a draft and won't be edited. The children and I look forward to reading your comments in the near future. Please also visit Room 20's class web page @ http://www.meadowbank.school.nz

Wednesday, October 10, 2007

one sunny day

One sunny day a weter saw a worm. I like how you slithered, thank you said the worm. then the worm slithered closer and
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(One sunny day a weta saw a worm. "I like how you slithered". "Thank you", said the worm. Then the weta.....

one sunny day

The Spider and a fly

One snowy day a spider saw a fly in it's web. Do you need some help asked the spider? Yes please

said the fly and the spider came closer and closer until she wraped him up in silk and she

ate him for lunch.

The fly and a spider

10.10.07
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in its web. Do you need some help asked the spider?
Yes please said the fly, the spider came closa.












The cat and the butterfliy

One hot day a cat saw a biack and yellow butterfliy. The cat said I like your wings so the butterfliy came closer ,clowser. How do you fliy said the cat/? Ifiap my wings. shoed the cat the cat jumped up and ate it.

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