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Tuesday, October 9, 2007

The spider and the fly

One morning a spider saw a fly by his web. He wanted to eat him. The fly got stuck and the spider ate him.

In the gully

One sunny sunny day a cat and a beetle were in the gully. "I like your colour" said the cat. The beetle was happy. "Thank you" said the beetle "and I like your creeping" he said to the cat. Then the cat jumped to the beetle and ate the beetle. "Very tasty" said the cat.

One morning

There was a little girl, her name was Emma. She saw a giant cat. It scared the dogs it gobbled all the birds up one by one.

The bird and the mosketle

one afternoon a bird was looking very kefely at a mosquito and she jamped ,and jamped and the bird didnt get the mosquito.

the butterfly and the cat

One morning a cat saw a butterfly. "I like your flutter" said the cat and the butterfly flew closer, and...closer........until pounce ...chew... chew...gulp. The next day the cat died.

the cat and the tui.

At erly morning a cat wos walking throo the Gully and the
cat saw a tui the cat sied to the tui I klie yor wite feathers.