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Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Kiri's Quilt retelling

wad day Kirj and mum and Dad cradi . To day kirj see a in bed.

One day Kiri and mum and dad cried. Today Kiri slept in a bed.

Kiri's Quilt

kin` Grandma dad and mum.

Kiri's Quilt - A retelling

Grandma died. it was sad. they got a quijt.theywuhapey.

(Grandma died, it was sad. They got a quilt. They were happy.)