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Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Men pirrts


Sowrd
chops heds off
Man off bood
ship
iicapden


Sword
Chops heads off
Man overboard
Ship
Aye, aye Captain





4 comments:

Room 22 said...

Well done, that is a great list poem about pirates!

From Miss Steptoe

Agar said...

What a fantastic story!! Well done Tom and Hamish! from Sally- Tom's Mom.

Marnie said...

Looks like a scary pirate!!
Miss Thomas

Anonymous said...

I love that poem!! I wish I could be there to hear Tom read it!

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