Welcome to Room 20's Blog Page! The children have been using Word to do their paired writing once a week. This term they will be blogging their draft writing so that students, teachers, parents, grandparents and more can enjoy reading it. In most cases it will remain a draft and won't be edited. The children and I look forward to reading your comments in the near future. Please also visit Room 20's class web page @ http://www.meadowbank.school.nz
Monday, October 15, 2007
The snake and the Crocodile
One daY a snake a saw a crocodile. the Crocodile chsd the snake in the beoch.
The Snake and the Lizard
one day a snake saw a lizard. It was note. The snake bit the lizard it was rely note.
The liza
The liza
The Snake and Mummy
One dark nght a sljtaery snake wrigldupto mum while she was cooking. the snak slivide
Thursday, October 11, 2007
The spider and the bird
oen drak nit a big bia an a sjig rey sjak fritd a big beb wos dedi .
(One dark night a big bird and a spider found a big ? He was dead.)
(One dark night a big bird and a spider found a big ? He was dead.)
in the foris (In the forest)
one drk rani nit a berd wos in a tree then the berd saw a msxeto by her
nest the
One dark rainy night a bird was...
nest the
One dark rainy night a bird was...
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
one sunny day
One sunny day a weter saw a worm. I like how you slithered, thank you said the worm. then the worm slithered closer and
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(One sunny day a weta saw a worm. "I like how you slithered". "Thank you", said the worm. Then the weta.....
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(One sunny day a weta saw a worm. "I like how you slithered". "Thank you", said the worm. Then the weta.....
The Spider and a fly
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in it's web. Do you need some help asked the spider? Yes please
said the fly and the spider came closer and closer until she wraped him up in silk and she
ate him for lunch.
said the fly and the spider came closer and closer until she wraped him up in silk and she
ate him for lunch.
The fly and a spider
10.10.07
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in its web. Do you need some help asked the spider?
Yes please said the fly, the spider came closa.
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in its web. Do you need some help asked the spider?
Yes please said the fly, the spider came closa.
The cat and the butterfliy
One hot day a cat saw a biack and yellow butterfliy. The cat said I like your wings so the butterfliy came closer ,clowser. How do you fliy said the cat/? Ifiap my wings. shoed the cat the cat jumped up and ate it.
black
butterfly
closer
fly
showed
black
butterfly
closer
fly
showed
Tuesday, October 9, 2007
The spider and the fly
One morning a spider saw a fly by his web. He wanted to eat him. The fly got stuck and the spider ate him.
In the gully
One sunny sunny day a cat and a beetle were in the gully. "I like your colour" said the cat. The beetle was happy. "Thank you" said the beetle "and I like your creeping" he said to the cat. Then the cat jumped to the beetle and ate the beetle. "Very tasty" said the cat.
One morning
There was a little girl, her name was Emma. She saw a giant cat. It scared the dogs it gobbled all the birds up one by one.
The bird and the mosketle
one afternoon a bird was looking very kefely at a mosquito and she jamped ,and jamped and the bird didnt get the mosquito.
the butterfly and the cat
One morning a cat saw a butterfly. "I like your flutter" said the cat and the butterfly flew closer, and...closer........until pounce ...chew... chew...gulp. The next day the cat died.
the cat and the tui.
At erly morning a cat wos walking throo the Gully and the
cat saw a tui the cat sied to the tui I klie yor wite feathers.
cat saw a tui the cat sied to the tui I klie yor wite feathers.
Thursday, September 20, 2007
the botancloo grined 's (The Botanical Gardens)
We went to the botancloo grined 's. It was fun I no it was going to be fun .
(We went to the Botanical Gardens. It was fun. I knew it was going to be fun.)
(We went to the Botanical Gardens. It was fun. I knew it was going to be fun.)
raby (Rubgy)
the all blacks are in franc. they are varsing itley for the wardcup i thik the all blacks are going to win.
(The All Blacks are in France. They are versing Italy for the World Cup. We think the All Blacks are going to win.)
(The All Blacks are in France. They are versing Italy for the World Cup. We think the All Blacks are going to win.)
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Tivivie
Room 24 went down into the staffroom to watch a tivivie video.It was very intresting.Only ladies can make tivivie.
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