Welcome to Room 20's Blog Page! The children have been using Word to do their paired writing once a week. This term they will be blogging their draft writing so that students, teachers, parents, grandparents and more can enjoy reading it. In most cases it will remain a draft and won't be edited. The children and I look forward to reading your comments in the near future. Please also visit Room 20's class web page @ http://www.meadowbank.school.nz
Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Helloween
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Monday, October 29, 2007
com ing to my hous
nona is coming to my hous I am asitid it is fun its very fun we like aw chada Ifingk ther is sam presints I wanda wot klos hse klos it is fun.
Ross kinyards
Ross cam to meadowbank School Ross is a ilansrter.He draw
(Ross Kinnaird came to Meadowbank School. Ross is an illustrator. He draws pictures in books.)
(Ross Kinnaird came to Meadowbank School. Ross is an illustrator. He draws pictures in books.)
Thursday, October 25, 2007
ross kinnard
on thursday we went to the hall. we saw all the starrys he rite. He read one of the starrys. ross came to drue. the druings are going to the libry.
Thursday
stories
write
Ross
draw
drawings
library
Thursday
stories
write
Ross
draw
drawings
library
Ross Kinnard
On Thursday we went to the hall to see . Ross Kinnyard he d rowed some pichers one of them were funny. It was the one of mis Jacsein.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Cameron the hungry frog
Once upon a time a frog called Cameron lived in a big,big pond. He was very, very hungry and he caghat some bugs.
Sophie the frog
One morning Sophie waked up and she had chikin poks. She screemed all over the plays. She told her frieds.
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Miss Steptoe - the hungry Frog
The frog called Harriet
One day a frog saw a bee. She thought it was a fly in dress ups. She ate it all up. Mmm, yum. Then she had a nap in the sun.
Molly and Bob
Molly and Bob were frogs and they were friends. The flies came close up to them and Molly and Bob caught them with their long, slimey tongues.
Thursday, October 18, 2007
We went on a bug hunt
Our bug hunt.
we went to the gully
we went too the gully we fuod mud and leefs a bee in the pot it is fun . bug hant we kach a bug it is a big bag it wos relee rllee frst guly we haf los of luck room 24 went too the gully.
(We went to the gully. We found mud and leaves. We put a bee in the pot. It is fun bug hunting. We caught a bug, it is a big bug. It was really, really fast.. We had lots of luck. Room 24 went to the gully.
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
The halloween party.
The cat and bird
the rugby werld cup
Tuesday, October 16, 2007
Witch and the mouse
Monday, October 15, 2007
The snake and the Crocodile
One daY a snake a saw a crocodile. the Crocodile chsd the snake in the beoch.
The Snake and the Lizard
one day a snake saw a lizard. It was note. The snake bit the lizard it was rely note.
The liza
The liza
The Snake and Mummy
One dark nght a sljtaery snake wrigldupto mum while she was cooking. the snak slivide
Thursday, October 11, 2007
The spider and the bird
oen drak nit a big bia an a sjig rey sjak fritd a big beb wos dedi .
(One dark night a big bird and a spider found a big ? He was dead.)
(One dark night a big bird and a spider found a big ? He was dead.)
in the foris (In the forest)
one drk rani nit a berd wos in a tree then the berd saw a msxeto by her
nest the
One dark rainy night a bird was...
nest the
One dark rainy night a bird was...
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
one sunny day
One sunny day a weter saw a worm. I like how you slithered, thank you said the worm. then the worm slithered closer and
cl
(One sunny day a weta saw a worm. "I like how you slithered". "Thank you", said the worm. Then the weta.....
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(One sunny day a weta saw a worm. "I like how you slithered". "Thank you", said the worm. Then the weta.....
The Spider and a fly
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in it's web. Do you need some help asked the spider? Yes please
said the fly and the spider came closer and closer until she wraped him up in silk and she
ate him for lunch.
said the fly and the spider came closer and closer until she wraped him up in silk and she
ate him for lunch.
The fly and a spider
10.10.07
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in its web. Do you need some help asked the spider?
Yes please said the fly, the spider came closa.
One snowy day a spider saw a fly in its web. Do you need some help asked the spider?
Yes please said the fly, the spider came closa.
The cat and the butterfliy
One hot day a cat saw a biack and yellow butterfliy. The cat said I like your wings so the butterfliy came closer ,clowser. How do you fliy said the cat/? Ifiap my wings. shoed the cat the cat jumped up and ate it.
black
butterfly
closer
fly
showed
black
butterfly
closer
fly
showed
Tuesday, October 9, 2007
The spider and the fly
One morning a spider saw a fly by his web. He wanted to eat him. The fly got stuck and the spider ate him.
In the gully
One sunny sunny day a cat and a beetle were in the gully. "I like your colour" said the cat. The beetle was happy. "Thank you" said the beetle "and I like your creeping" he said to the cat. Then the cat jumped to the beetle and ate the beetle. "Very tasty" said the cat.
One morning
There was a little girl, her name was Emma. She saw a giant cat. It scared the dogs it gobbled all the birds up one by one.
The bird and the mosketle
one afternoon a bird was looking very kefely at a mosquito and she jamped ,and jamped and the bird didnt get the mosquito.
the butterfly and the cat
One morning a cat saw a butterfly. "I like your flutter" said the cat and the butterfly flew closer, and...closer........until pounce ...chew... chew...gulp. The next day the cat died.
the cat and the tui.
At erly morning a cat wos walking throo the Gully and the
cat saw a tui the cat sied to the tui I klie yor wite feathers.
cat saw a tui the cat sied to the tui I klie yor wite feathers.
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